Friday, 25 March 2016

war poetry

,k"Oh Jesus make it stop"
During wars, the time was brutal which left unforgetable memories and also made a big effect in poetry. People started writing more and telling their stories and how they felt about the war. Most people show the brutality and tragedy of it in their poem.

  The wirers is Its a simple poem about the dangerous job of repairing the barbed wire in front of the trenches during World War I. This had to be done at night otherwise the wirers would be shot. Occasionally the enemy (Germans in this case) would fire up a flare to illuminate No Mans Land, the land between the allied and German trenches. That's how poor Hughes was caught out in the poem. The best thing to do to avoid detection in poor light is to stand absolutely still - the eye is designed to detect movement. At the end he writes "no doubt he’ll die to-day. But we can say the front-line wire’s been safely mended."this shows that he is sarcastically saying that ;well at leats the wire is up, eventhough he died.

In the wind of downs The writer uses imagery and lots if repetitions to tell us the poem.
The big idea of the poem is that the girl can't see his face but only his khaki uniform.
She doesn't think he is dead and she can't remember him, that's what the first stanza is about. "brown and tall, "strong and living" these are all metaphors describeing him.
The idea of the second stanza is about that she doesn't want to belive that he is dead amd she is waiting for him to come back while she is doing things they used to do to get.

Arms of the boy is powerfully telling us about soldiers in the world war one. The big idea is that the war is unnatural which is told through metaphors and imagery.The first paragraph is about the secretion of the gun which is followed by the 2nd stanza which describes the cartridges and bullets and the third stanza is about that people are not designed to kill. One example of metaphor is when it says "how cold steel is, and keen with hunger of blood."  this metaphor is telling us about the bayonet-blade and one example for imagery is "there lurk no claws behind his fingers supple; and God will grow no talons at his heels, nor anthlers through the thickness of his curls" This tells us anout the boy and how people are not supposed to be killed.

"Passing through this gate"
Sassooon uses metaphors'listing and repatition to tell us the big idea of this poem which is that people won't remember the soldiers whise bodies weren't found.
"Who will remember passing through this gate, the unheraoic dead who fed rhe guns?" This sentence shows that the writer asks himself who will remember the soldiers who fought in the war and were heroicly fighting for our country. "Their names liveth for ever" This shows the writer wants their names to be remembered forever. He uses metaphors like sullen swamps and 'dead who struggeled in the slime'

Overall there were lots of poems wrotten about WW1 which are very powerfull and describe the whole war.

Wednesday, 23 March 2016

The wind of the downs

The writer uses imagery and lots if repetitions to tell us the poem.
The big idea of the poem is that the girl can't see his face but only his khaki uniform.
She doesn't think he is dead and she can't remember him, that's what the first stanza is about. "brown and tall, "strong and living" these are all metaphors describeing him.
The idea of the second stanza is about that she doesn't want to belive that he is dead amd she is waiting for him to come back while she is doing things they used to do together.

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on passing the new main gate

"Passing through this gate"
Sassooon uses metaphors'listing and repatition to tell us the big idea of this poem which is that people won't remember the soldiers whise bodies weren't found.
"Who will remember passing through this gate, the unheraoic dead who fed rhe guns?" This sentence shows that the writer asks himself who will remember the soldiers who fought in the war and were heroicly fighting for our country. "Their names liveth for ever" This shows the writer wants their names to be remembered forever. He uses metaphors like sullen swamps and 'dead who struggeled in the slime'
Its a simple poem about the dangerous job of repairing the barbed wire in front of the trenches during World War I. This had to be done at night otherwise the wirers would be shot. Occasionally the enemy (Germans in this case) would fire up a flare to illuminate No Mans Land, the land between the allied and German trenches. That's how poor Hughes was caught out in the poem. The best thing to do to avoid detection in poor light is to stand absolutely still - the eye is designed to detect movement. At the end he says sarcastically well at leats the wire is up, eventhough he died.

-metaphors, sound imagery, 

Tuesday, 22 March 2016


I hate the way you talk to me 4 feet 2 4 i am 8
And the way you cut your hair 3feet2 3 i am 6
I hate the way you drive my car 4feet2 4 i am 8
I hate it when you stare 3feet2 3 i am 6

I hate your big dumb combat boots 4 feet 2 i am
And the way you read my mind 3 feet 2

I hate you so much that it makes me sick 5
It even makes me rhyme 3 feet 2

I hate the way you're always right 
I hate it when you lie 
I hate it when you make me laugh 
Even worse when you make me cry 

I hate the way you're not around 
And the fact that you didn't call 
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you 
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all

lots os repetitions
juxtaposition

poetry analysis

Now, God be thanked who has matched us with his hour,
      And caught our youth, and wakened us from sleeping!
With hand made sure, clear eye, and sharpened power,
      To turn, as swimmers into cleanness leaping,
Glad from a world grown old and cold and weary;
      Leave the sick hearts that honor could not move,
And half-men, and their dirty songs and dreary,
      And all the little emptiness of love!
Oh! we, who have known shame, we have found release there,
      Where there’s no ill, no grief, but sleep has mending,
            Naught broken save this body, lost but breath;
Nothing to shake the laughing heart’s long peace there,
      But only agony, and that has ending;
            And the worst friend and enemy is but Death.

it has 14 lines which is for writing in a eomantic style
the rhythm goes like 4,4,6
imagery-clear eye, and sharpened power
simile-as swimmers
world grown old and cold and weary;personififation amd imagery
Leave the sick hearts that honor could not move- personification